Saturday, March 10, 2012

thesis statements

step 1.Topic :tennis
step 2.Issue :It makes people stronger
step 3:because :We use the tennis racket to hit the ball so that's make our hand stronger
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5 comments:

  1. RooMarch 10, 2012 at 10:30 PM

    Can u be more Broad in your step 3 ?

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  2. Andy TranMarch 11, 2012 at 1:12 AM

    I don't understand step 3

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  3. choiMarch 11, 2012 at 5:17 AM

    I don't understand step3 and step2.

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  4. RexMarch 11, 2012 at 9:25 AM

    Can you tell me more about step 2 and 3?

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  5. Mr. ArunskiMarch 12, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    How does it make people stronger? Are you really going to write a whole essay on making your hand stronger? You must make step 3 broader.

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